Test your homepage story

Your homepage is the first story most people hear about your business.

But here’s the truth:

• If an outsider can’t understand you in 10 seconds, they bounce.

• If your headline sounds like jargon, they tune out.

• If your page doesn’t answer “Why you, and not the dozen others?” — you’ve lost them.

That’s why I created the Homepage Story Test.

1. Can a smart outsider understand what you do in under 10 seconds of landing on your homepage?

2. Is your headline written in plain English—or buried in buzzwords?

3. Does your homepage give a crisp answer to “Why you, and not the dozen others?”

If you answered "No" to any of these questions, your story isn't delivering on the promise of your business.

WHAT YOU CAN DO NOW

Schedule your free, 30-min consultation today.

WHAT YOU'LL GET

Walk away with 3 story fixes you can implement today to make your homepage resonate.

WHO AM I?

I'm Jesse Ratner. I'm an award-winning copywriter/marketer with 30+ years of experience helping startups and enterprises find the message in the noise. I’ve worked with Google, Samsung, Uber and many more—translating complex ideas into stories that resonate.

In a short, free session I’ll review your homepage live and show you 3 actionable fixes you can make today. No fluff. No pitch deck. Just clarity.

👉 Book your free session.